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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program (SNCO of the Quarter, 3rd)
Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: No
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Key Points to Writing
- If you haven't already, take
a writing class
- WRITE!!! The more you do it, the better you get.
- Don't be afraid to ask for HELP.
- The only person looking out for either you or your subordinate is YOU!
- Use a spell checker (F7 in Office)
- Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
- Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online.
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY
- Presents a polished military
apprearance and is a superb representative of our American
cummunity
- Stellar performance as the Senior AF Enlisted Manager during a 60-day gap
ensured critical personnel issues
were handled professionally and efficiently; processed two humanitarian
PCSs with speed and compassion
- Brought dilapidated AF Personnel Program up to full speed; established
benchmark USAF checklist for
inprocessing, decoration and EPR processing, and administrative
correspondence
- Authored Allied Signals Group's annual history report--hailed as exceptional
by the Command's historian
- Demonstrated excellent written and oratory skills as Master of Ceremony for
several high profile events
- Displayed coordination skills for 3 promotion ceremonies and an Armed Forces
Day obersevance ceremony
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT
- Enrolled in a college math course to complete CCAF Degree in Information
Management--3.5 GPA
- Started Senior NCO Academy correspondence course in preparation for 9-Level.
- Successfully completed telecommunications orientation training at the NATO
training facility in Latina, Italy
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Shines in numerous ways to improve quality of life for JCSC personnel, their
extended families, and beyond
-- Worked closely on projects with US military personnel assigned to
Combined Air Operations Center 7
-- Recognized for his warmth and teambuilding skills when working with
our coalition members
- President of a multi-national Parent Teacher Organization--Facilitated smooth
transfer of the entire student
population & logistics from a DOD school to a
private international school ensuring school opened on time
-- Mediated between parents and school staff to maintain harmonious working
relationships, and maximized
parent satisfaction within the limitations of the
new school. Effort were praised by all
-- Organized and led parent-teacher meetings, open house events, and fund
raising activities, negotiated a
complex bus contract, and kept the parents
informed on every aspect of their children's new environment
- Played a major role in organizing the inaugural Headquarters Organization Day.
The event was judged a
complete success by the Commander and all national
components who were initially skeptical of the concept
-- Supervised the feeding of over 500 personnel and their families; canvassed
local restaurants and vendors
for contributions to use as door prizes; and
served as the event's master of ceremonies and disk jockey
- AF Birthday Committee Chairman; event was highlighted by a locally produced
video and cake cutting
-- event attended by 4 flag/star officers; all sang of praise for event success
- Personally raised $800 for Top-3 Association and organized two first-rate SNCO
promotion ceremonies
- Strong leadership traits resulted in recently being elected as president of
the joint service Top-3 Association
- Organized and led base clothing and food drives for underprivileged children -
averages 400 lbs monthly
- Member of the Asian Heritage Month planning committee
- Assisted with "AF Summer Jamboree"-- weekend of esprit-de-corps events for AF
members and their families
Note: Not a very good package when you compare it to the previous one,
2003 2nd Quarter SNCO, on the same person.
Some of the bullets have been used before. This is important to note for
both supervisors and judges. Look at events, and keep a calendar handy.
If the writer uses a past accomplishment, then it should reflect badly on the
nominee... Or at least remove that bullet from the package before scoring
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