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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program (Airman of the Quarter 2nd) (Air Force Reserve)
Award Cat: Amn
Winner: Wing
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Key Points to Writing
- WRITE!!! The more you do it, the better you get.
- Ask for HELP, the only person looking out for #1 is you.
- The only person looking out for your subordinates is YOU!
- Use a spell checker. F7 works
great in MS Word.
- Use Merriam-Webster Online
to improve your vocabulary.
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The following example has been taken out of a IMT document. I have changed mission information to protect myself and the
people I have received the information from. I will attempt to give a
little insight to the entire process if I know it.
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Outstanding technician! Expertly manned <##>Job Control; provided computer
support for 960 customers
-- Increased productivity! Reset over 38 network passwords; provided mbrs access
to email, LAN & Internet
-- Quickly identified/released 18 computers from quarantine; immediate use of
equipment; no impact to reserves
-- Expertly installed/setup new PC at <SQU> AMDS;
50% less time to complete admin tasks; major improvement!
-- Unmatched efficiency; researched & fixed <SQU> ARS network printer; restored
service in under 30 minutes
-- Rapidly reinstalled critical software on two laptops; equipment was
operational prior to AEF deployment
-- Analyzed in-operative UTAPS card reader; corrected Windows driver problem;
allowed mbrs to sign-in/out
- Volunteered for 20 day AEF, <##> ABS, Moron, Spain; provided exceptional
technical support for 750 people
-- 100% compliance! Flawlessly updated 250+ Exchange profiles; met AF directory
standards & suspense date
-- Wrote 12 step operating procedures on how to create new user accounts; used
to train all new AEF personnel
-- Information assurance; audited/deleted 74 obsolete email profiles/network
ids; ensured secure environment
-- Opened/logged 46 incidents in Remedy problem database; researched/resolved
all issues in 30 mins or less
-- Enforced AF regulations! In 4 days audited, identified & removed unauthorized
software on 24 workstations
-- Expertly diagnosed/resolved serious storage shortage; mapped 3 new 120G
drives; increased space by 35%
-- Recognized security threat; changed security permissions on two file servers;
prevented unauthorized access
- Embraces/endorses/promotes fitness! Exceptional unit Physical Training
Manager; spearheaded all activities
-- Pro-actively organized, scheduled, & tracked "Fit to Fight" examinations;
encouraged & supported members
-- Coordinated one hour of aerobic exercises every Saturday; obtained 100% unit
participation; unbelievable!
- Reliable/dependable; can be trusted to complete any tasking; always goes above
and beyond the call of duty
-- Helps out with wing events; installed/configured 6 laptops for kids
game booth at <###> ARW family day picnic
-- Can do attitude! Takes initiative to clean up/organize work center every UTA;
leaving it in inspection order
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Devoted to learning! Seizes educational opportunities; excels in advancing
professional knowledge & career
-- Recently enrolled in Amn Leadership correspondence course; studying four
hours a week; testing Sept UTA
-- Attending Microsoft Exchange Server classes; learning to troubleshoot and
solve email/network problems
- Now ACC certified! Obtained necessary skills to fill any & all base networking
positions; mission essential!
-- In less than 3 months, completed grueling "3C0
- Initial Qualification Training" exam; normally takes one year
-- No easy task! Studied 9 long, in-depth CBT courses, 2 AFIs & 20 hrs of OJT;
equal to 5 credit college course
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Faithfully volunteers! Spends time mentoring/coaching children at Hilburn
Drive Elementary, <CHOMP>
-- Contributed time, talent, & money to "Super Kids" day; raised money for
desperately needed school supplies
- Actively attends/supports Good Hope Baptist Church; helps organize & prepare
Sunday school for adults/kids
- Humanitarian! Unselfishly donates whole blood to Red Cross; one pint every 8
weeks; giving the gift of life
- Donated & transported clothes, household items & furniture to Goodwill
Industries, helping the less fortunate
- Consistently helps neighbors with trimming trees, fixing plumbing/electrical
problems, & home improvements
NOTE:
Very good package. I will talk to
the submitter to see if i can place the original up. I think it is very
important to see how the package has changed.... <Check out the Original
and the Email Thread that got it here.> |