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Brigadier General Sarah P. Wells Award
Outstanding Airman of the Year
4N051/Aerospace Medical Journeyman

Award Cat: Amn
Winner: Group









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Pace-setter! Handpicked by Sq/CC over six others for SrA BTZ promotion; absolutely shines above her peers!
- Awarded Airman of the Quarter for <BASE> second quarter! Unlimited potential/example for all to follow
- Lead medic; responded to altercation/recognized unsafe scene--safeguarded crew/treated two trauma victims
- Confident under pressure; splinted/treated patient with dislocated & fractured extremities--praised by surgeon
- Saved life! Responded to 911 call for <REMOVED>; noted signs of cardiac distress/initiated protocols
- Acquired IV access on lethargic youth where others failed; avoided hospital admission/parents praised skills
- Sound clinical skills; assisted doctor with critical chest tube insertion--procedure ensured optimal outcome
- Admin whiz! Processed 600 peer review charts--100% compliance with patient care documentation standards
- Meticulous; researched & contacted ER patients issued crutches--resources returned ... saved MDG over $500
- Trained 200 mobility troops on new AF Individual First Aid Kit/Self Aid Buddy Care--readied for deployment
- Stocked two new ambulances; standardized equipment/supplies--vehicles guaranteed 100% mission readiness
- Managed provider review process; channeled feedback/improved patient coding--recaptured $50K for AF use
- Proactive! Developed critical call data sheet for personnel during pager system failure--ensured 100% contact
- "Latex free" cart monitor; performed inspections of equipment/supplies--prevented possible allergic reactions
- Sifted through/organized 800 ambulance run sheets; identified examples for training tools--quality soared 50%
- Met with Sexual Assault Response Coordinator; taught procedures to personnel--hospital in 100% compliance
- Coordinated with ER director; developed Ambulatory Data System injury codes reference--physicians raved
- Vital Immediate Team member; created exercise training supply kits--saved MDG $10K on medical supplies
- Go to Airman! Crucial during mock code blue; initiated protocols verbatim with poise ... kudos from evaluator
- First-rate training aid; volunteered during MARE as moulage patient ... EET praised believable performance
- Responded to football player with dislocated knee; field assessment sped definitive care/surgery--limb saved
- Stand-out troop! 1/5 Airmen handselected to attend lunch with Gp/CC--provided a voice for junior enlisted
- Superb preceptor/mentor; led new troop through intricacies of orientation/job duties--expedited qualifications
- Frontline patient advocate; singled out in customer service survey--lauded for professionalism/job knowledge
- Motivated! Taught Basic Life Support class to personnel ... ensured certifications are IAW MDG instructions
- Practices service-before-self; sponsored single parent--smooth transition for family ... praised by new troop

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Invaluable resource! Only Airman out of 12 MDG CPR instructors; primed to keep Wing 100% CPR qualified
- Education zealot! Easily maintained 4.0 GPA; six credits away from CCAF--actively pursuing Nursing degree
- Named shift-leader above peers; utilized during manning crisis/expertly managed shift--accolades from OIC
- Fit to fight! Tailored strict fitness regimen to meet personal goals; exemplifies AFI 36-2903/perfect AF image
- Craves knowledge; eagerly attended Family Support Center investment class--financially prepared for future
- Multi-talented; attained excellence in every aspect--authored two poems/published nationally in spring 2005
- Attended training session with hospital coder; shared knowledge with flight--saved MDG over $20K FY 05
- Keeping AF customs alive; sought out base retreat procedures--flawless performance! Ceremony inspirational

BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Committed! Provided eight off duty hours of medical coverage for Japan Day; 3.5K attended--successful event
- Far East Bazaar staffer; managed security/safeguarded $400K in merchandise--raised $59K for local charities
- Mentored Girl Scout troop; presented tour & briefing on ER procedures--inspired youth to AF health careers
- Unwaivering commitment; sorted 2K+ lbs of mail--provided invaluable aid during wartime manning shortage
- Briefed First Term Airman Center students on meeting boards; sat on mock board--helped to mold future of AF
- Supported mission; selflessly volunteered six hours medical coverage for 301st warrior week--zero mishaps
- Invited to First Term Airman Center graduation to proffer during ceremony ... model Airman for all to emulate!
- Avid supporter of base intramural sports; played flag football for MDG team--epitome of unit espirit de corps

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Very good package, lots of information but lacking hard impact.  Only slight errors, a definite example for others to follow.


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