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Comm-Electronics Maintainer of the Year
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: Functional
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DUTY PERFORMANCE:
- #1 2E6 Airman in the NCC! Earned squadron & group
Communications-Electronics Maintainer of the Quarter
- Mobilized four UTC increments in under 12 hours for Pakistan earthquake relief
ops--forces rapidly deployed
- Deployed to Manas AB, Kyrgyzstan in support of Pakistan earthquake
relief--superb voice svc to joint forces
-- Programmed BAM alternate route through foreign switch...preserved DSN
capabilities--100% up-time rate
- Palletized equip for Exercise BRIGHT STAR...11 increments 100% air mobile
ready--enabled safe transport
- Deployed to Cairo West Air Base (CWAB), Egypt--maintained 23 telephone
lines/equip valued over $100K
-- Supported exercise BRIGHT STAR--provided secure/nonsecure service to
200 Joint & Coalition personnel
- Engineered CWAB voice and network infrastructure...installed 3000+ ft
cable--provided critical C4 capability
- Programmed priority dialing group at CWAB for entire CFOC & command
staff--vital to mission requirements
- Troubleshot/repaired voice trunk cable connecting CWAB to CONUS
circuits--required for COMSEC mission
- Developed deployed phone book/DSN listing--provided essential user friendly
instructions for 200 customers
- Meticulously detailed excessive phone usage...scrubbed 275+ daily
calls--lauded by CC: "Excellent product"
- Coordinated T-1 circuit programming with CENTCOM/DISA--resulted in "Zero"
reprogramming...best to date
- Troubleshot secure telephone--enabled AFCOM/CC to conduct critical secure comm
with higher headquarters
- Provided communication support for combat/counter-intelligence air
exercises--250+ successful sorties logged
- Processed 25K+ lbs of equip...perfect HAZDECs--facilitated safe shipment of 24
pallets from Egypt to Robins
- Excelled during ORE--palletized nine short tons in
five hours...zero errors--vital
to "Excellent" phase 1 rating
-- Configured BAMs--all services activated 12 hours ahead of ACC
standard--lauded "Best seen in six
years"
- Efficiently set up telephone switch on first DICE Exercise--provided 12
phones/established link in eight hours
-- Briefed roles/responsibilities for ACC Command Chief visit--provided
insight in to DICE package mission
- Tested/installed 2.5K ft of fiber during COMEX--facilitated activation of 3
remote switches and 40 site phones
- Led 6-man team organize $8M worth of TDC equip by UTC/increment--slashed
pallet build-up time over 40%
- Organized and inventoried over 17K items in storage cage--acclaimed as "Best
practice" by ## CCG during UCE
- Tested/repaired six tactical
telephone cables...provided service up to 50 users--saved $2100 in material
costs
- Inventoried and turned in 181 spare telephones to TDC depot--filled short-fall
requirement for other field units
- Performed audit of precision measuring equipment list--guaranteed
accountability for 22 items valued at $45K
- Consolidated 8 BAM manuals into one step-by-step guide--10 training hours
saved in task research per trainee
- Developed in-depth user friendly BAM programming cutsheet--saved 8 hours every
voice equipment activation
- Primary shop trainer! Instructed four new Airmen on setup, programming, and
configuration of Redcom Switch
-- Effort contributed to shop success during local comm
exercise--exceeded ORI activation criteria by 24 hours
- Performed re-key of 10 STEs...preserved interoperability with STE and STU-III
terminals--deployment ready
- Excelled in C4 event during ## CCG Combat Readiness
competition--installed/configured all voice components
-- Validated 40+ voice connections...led team to first place finish in
event--sealed championship for ## CBCS
- Superior operational and program mgmt efforts vital to ## CCG earning the Air
Force Outstanding Unit Award
DUTY RELATED SELF IMPROVEMENT EFFORTS:
- Received comprehensive Inmarsat training--vital to connectivity in areas
beyond cellular communication reach
- Researched advanced class of service feature for BAM...trained four
personnel--eliminated two deficient tasks
- Completed 9-hour TO CBT--incorporated knowledge into program--built new
continuity book/readied for UCI
- Completed TO college exam/revamped program...ordered 29 references--current
TOs now used to maint equip
- Received five hours satellite
terminal training--ensured 26 prime tasks were cross utilized across ICE package
- Researched power supply limits/capabilities for 220V operation--vital to
protect 10 personnel/$6M equipment
- Completed Frequency Mgmt/Information Assurance CBTs--100% SORTS qualified for
ancillary training items
- Conducted extensive training on telephone switch backup programming--enhanced
voice recovery capabilities
-- Shared knowledge w/four section personnel--improved skills necessary
to quickly program/configure BAM
General Notes:
Couple of numbering errors.
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