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12 Outstanding SNCO of the Year

3E191/Superintendent, Infrastructure & Squadron

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Squadron

AFI 36-2805 para 3.4









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
- Sq CEM for 2 months; faultlessly led 109 engineers--surpassed sq msn to "Be-Ready, Be-Safe & Be-the-Best"
- Ops Flt SME! Tackled Wg/CC's issues; resolved RAC-1 safety risk/housing QoL issues in hrs--lauded by CC
- Commanded Flt's completion of 6.5K job orders--thrashed USAFE's 90% goal...phenomenal 98% on time rate
- Led Flight's review of 370 UCI items; '08 UCI/IG recognized Flt w/"Pat on the Back" & "Excellence Award"
- Catalyst for sq reorganization; guaranteed Ops Flt exceeded Sq CC's expectations--enforced AF/A7 directive
- Solved air-conditioning issues; LRS armory humidity/NCC cooling--protected $110K weapons/$2M network
- Managed AF's 2nd largest fuel sys; 4.5 mile pipeline/65M gal bulk tank mx--trans-Atlantic mission sustained
- Smashed IG complaint; educated clients on service call process & CE ops--efforts lauded by Wg IG & Sq CC
- Led charge to eradicate dangerous/stinging insects in 32 facilities--in-house solution saved $15K vs contract
- Directed UCC C2; managed assessment/augmentee teams on HurCon Exer--garnered 'Superior Performer' team
- Supervised TLF's storm water/sewer cross-connection; completed job in 2-days--cancelled 2-yr-old finding
- Evaluated/engineered exhaust sys at CATM; saved $240K/yr in TDYs--solved Wg's OIF/OEF tasking shortfall
- Led charge on water plant line rupture; completed repairs in <4 hours--prevented loss of 15K gal...saved $76K
- Engineered/led Top III Enlisted Heritage room construction; USAFE/CCC humbled--Lajes headlined HQ news
- Ops Superintendent; led 74 people in 4 sections supporting 898 facilities/$1.5B--nailed pillar "Moving Iron"
 

BASE/COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Professional! Instructed AEF to FTAC students/briefed ALS on teamwork--postured ABW Amn for success
- Worked 150+ hrs w/Asian Pacific events; coordinated Angra & July 4th Polynesian shows--entertained 2K+
- Drove Sq/MSG NCO Sijan boards/organized 2 SUM dinners--best rep sent to USAFE/fed largest wg turnout
- OPR/oversaw ## CES CoC/assisted Booster Club Haunted House tour--perfect execution/boosted sq morale
- Deftly managed team of 50 for "Taste of Asia"; fed & entertained 300+--raised $1.5K for base/local charities
- Chaired SNCOQ board; selected MSG's top enlisted leader--best-of-best competed for Wg/MAJCOM award

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Started '08 as SNCO Academy graduate/ended '08 w/AFIT's Commanders' Contingency Course--stellar year!
- Completed Senior Enlisted JPME course; armed w/Crisis Planning for joint service task--on track for HQ job
- Benchmark grades! Aced Basic Marketing course w/97.75% average--earned three hrs toward BS...GPA 3.85
- Maintained 4.0 GPA in Computer Technology--garnered another 3 credit hours toward BS Management degree
- Starred in AFN "<BASE>' Amn Pride" video; aired worldwide to increase AF recruitment--primed for TV role
- Recognized winner! Garnered ## CES '08 SNCOQ/Y & ## ABW '08 "Chief Daniels" leadership nominee!



 

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