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Award Examples
Military Volunteer (Volunteer of the Quarter, 1st)
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: SQU
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The following Military Volunteer (Special Awards/Recognition Program) example has been taken out of an IMT document.
I did not change mission information, only names to protect myself and the
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prompts me to work harder on the site.) As for this particular award , it appears to be a
USAFE award. I am still looking for a reference concerning it.
- Sacrificed 18 hrs of valuable/limited personal time coaching London Central
High School weight training class
-- Individually tailored programs for 10 weightlifters--provided valuable
weightlifting tips/breathing technique
-- Supplied personal experience to six on coaching staff--developed student
athletes personal training programs - Donated 3 hours off-duty time to mentor
and instruct two high school students during study halls; superb mentor
-- Filled the educational gap for students traveling/missing school--motivated
apprentices to learn new material
- RAF Croughton base soccer team leader--fostered host nation relations by
playing three United Kingdom teams
- Volunteered 10 hours supervising and cleaning for the RAF Croughton Youth
Group keeping teens off the street
-- Developed and sustained activities for teens--efforts provided a safe
alternative place for base teens to meet
- Moved over 200 cases of Girl Scout Cookies to/from storage area--key to scouts
raising $8K+ in cookie sales
- Humanitarian! Sacrificed 2 hours to cook/clean/serve at Croughton's free
Valentines Couples Spaghetti Dinner
- First to take charge! Assumed responsibility of Det's AF Assistance Fund
Campaign--100% contact in 12 hrs
- United RAF Croughton Chapel community--cooked and cleaned at
four free soup
dinners--fed more than 100!
Note: Great package! Quick, Simple and to the Point. Only a
minor
Numbering problem, numbers under
10 are spelled out unless they deal with time or follow numbers larger than 10
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