Award Examples
Annual Awards Program
Award Cat: Civilian Category I GS07-GS08
Winner: Squadron
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The following civilian award example has been taken from an AF1206 - IMT so the formatting
might be off. I did not changed mission information,
only names to protect myself and the
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE
- Selected "superior performer" by AETC ORI Team Chief--1 of only 7 in
wing--coined by 19AF/CC & FW/CC
- Respected subject matter expert AETC-wide; answered 400 customer/peer
inquiries from across the command
- Mastered complex Freedom of Information Act (FOIA)/Privacy Act (PA)
database--processed 82 requests
-- Tripled output from previous years--met all deadlines/ensured compliance with
Congressional mandates
- Reenergized <BASE> RM program; updated AF Records Information Management
System (AF-RIMS)/FOIA/
PA curriculums--trained 242 records custodians (RC) and functional area records
managers (FARM)
- Led electronic records management (ERM) effort; obtained senior leader buy
in--usage up 90% in 6 months
- Coordinated with NCC to allocate ERM server space--base poised for anticipated
growth 2 years in the future
- Led implementation of new AF-RIMS computer based training courses--Tyndall the
first base in the command
- Enhanced FARM/RC training; reduced classroom time 70%; FARM/RC trained within
60 days of appointment
- Discovered Family Care Plan/Child Development Center guidance disconnect; took
action--AF-wide impact!
-- Elevated violation of Public Law w/possible solution to AF-level--avoided
potential class action lawsuits
- Managed base-level programs/prepared for 05 AETC ORI with manning at 33%; no
adverse inpact to mission
- Approved 430 file plans disapproved by unexpected AF-RIMS glitch--ensured 100%
just-in-time review
-- Superior efforts, attention-to-detail, and compliance with directives were
lauded by ORI team inspectors
- Overhauled 1.5K sq ft staging area; inventoried 1.7K boxes; zero discrepancies
during ORI; flawless program
- Devised new standardized color-coded inventory system--expedited staged
records retrieval time by 20%
-- Purged 585 boxes of obsolete records/films--freed up 600 cubic ft of valuable
space--enhanced efficiency
- Dedicated to improving records management AF wide; submitted two suggestions
for HQ AF consideration
-- Recommended posting medical pubs on internet--will save $15K in processing
costs/96 man-hours annually
- Proposed using AF-RIMS as disposition labels on ERM servers AF-wide;
adopted--saved the AF $800K
- Served on tiger team to create new "paperless" performance report tracking
system; inputs key to success
-- Ensured all privacy considerations were addressed--modernized report
processing using existing technology
- Recommended tagging civilian personnel records "Frozen" in AF-RIMS; Air Staff
adopted--AF-wide impact
- Worked with ACC RM to provide 1AF records management support for Hurricane
Katrina relief efforts
-- Provided deployed support personnel capability to create/maintain records
concerning deployment efforts
- Provided vital For Official Use Only e-mail policy guidance--ensured base in
compliance w/new AF policy
- Developed Privacy Act training course; incorporated detailed tracking
system--ensured 6.5K personnel trained
- Lead numerous short-notice AETC data calls; mobilized base FARMs--ensured
Tyndall's 100% on-time rate
- Identified 85 boxes of medical records past due retirement to records
center--removed 4 year old discrepancy
- Commanded high-visibility base-level function; lead 3 troops..all
excelled--superb effort--made it look easy
- Provided superior leadership/training/memtorship/support to 36 host base and
associate unit FARMs
-- Two FARMs received by-name recognition during ORI--12 of 13 FARMs assessed
rated "Outstanding"
- Completed 3-day Civilian Personnel Management Course--troops
benifited
immediately; production soared
- Selected as both the ### Comm Sq and ### MSG-level Category I Civilian of the
Quarter for Jan - Mar 05
SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENTS
- Completed NCO Academy in-residence; a first for <BASE> civilians--1 of only 3
civilians selected in AETC
- Completed 3-day Dept of Justice FOIA/PA course--provided detailed briefing to
base program managers
- Completed two management courses through U of Maryland towards BA degree--3.6
GPA
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Served as Volunteer Income Tax Assistant; donated 8+ hours--saved $1000s for
Team <BASE> populous
- Led MSG bowling fundraiser for Katrina Relief Fund; personally coordinated
event--6 units/60 participants
-- Raised $405--coined by ### MSG/CC for Katrina relief support--a total
success...she's always out front!
- Key member of Base Women's Bowling Team; led team to first place in city
tourney--superb AF representative
NOTE: Pretty good civilian award package. There were a couple of
misspellings, one
Acronym Error and one
Grammar Error. PA was spelled out
in the beginning of the package and then abbreviated, but the abbreviation was
never used. Privacy Act was used in its full form toward the end of the
award package. The Grammar Error was the use of an ellipse. An
ellipse is three periods"..." not two "..". Other than these three items, this
is a good example of a junior level civilian package. |