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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program
Non-Commissioned Officer (NCO) of the Year
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: ???
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY: Hand-picked to lead Sq
evaluation team
- Replaced a MSgt as the NCOIC of Quality Assurance work center leading a
7-person inspection team ensuring
quality maintenance production and management practices are enforced throughout
290+ communications unit
- Mentor! Subordinates garnered '05 ## BW Lt Gen Leo Marquez Award, Sq Amn of the
Year, & NCO of the Qtr
- Ensured 100% technical evaluations were performed on all Visual Imagery and
Intrusion Detection equipment
for the largest weapons storage area in the Air Force--passed with "Excellent"
rating during '05 HQ ACC NSI
- Supervised the performance of 137 technical, personnel, special, and
managerial evaluations in support of the
communications standardization and evaluation program (CSEP); backlog decreased
to 90% completion rate
- Developed "plan of attack" to follow-up status on current and overdue CSEP
reports for all maintenance work
centers; aggressive work plan will get them "IG ready" in 90 days; well exceeded
six month proposed schedule
- Authored the Sq Monthly Maintenance Plan; highlights critical maintenance
deficiency areas and trend analysis,
guidance, and governing directives to flight leadership and ## CS/CC; gives high
visibility to areas of concern
- Integrated Maintenance Database System (IMDS) guru; aided Sq personnel with
seamless transfer from CAMS
-- Tracked all personnel in OJT upgrade training and ensured all work center
tasks are loaded--100% accurate
- Revised Sq OI 21-2 to supplement new AFI 21-116, Maintenance Management of
Communications-Electronics
-- Ensured standardization and compliance for CSEP functional concepts,
responsibilities, and key procedures
- Completed overhaul of QAwork center master task listing and training plan;
personnel will be cross-utilized
to evaluate multiple AFSCs and communications-electronic equipment assigned to
maintenance flight--superb!
- Provided valuable info to FAA technicians locating cause of instrument landing
system frequency interference
-- Pinpointed source to local radio station--FCC directed frequency change,
eliminating flight safety hazards
- Aided the transfer of ## CS technical order (TO) program; over 1,000 TOs are
100% accounted for and updated
- Sq Flightline Driving Program representative; expertly trained over 50
personnel--all cleared for safe driving
- Aided in construction of a new training classroom for the flight; added 10
work stations and recouped 355 sq ft
of wasted space needed for growing training requirements; additional space can
train 500 students more a year
- ## BW Sexual Assault Response Coordinator's Victim Advocate for 5,000 Airmen;
trained over 290 personnel
on wingman responsibilities concerning the growing number of sexual assaults in
the Air Force--99% complete
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT: Epitomizes the "whole-person" concept;
continually strives to achieve
- Graduated Cum Laude from Louisiana Tech w/ Bachelor's Degree in General
Studies/Business Administration
- Completed challenging Communications-Electronics Maintenance Support
Procedures Course at Keesler AFB
-- Obtained much needed knowledge of QA inspection procedures; bringing work
center to "UCI ready" status
- Completed difficult federal and state income tax preparation course; learned
new tax laws for preparing returns
- Attended 2-week Sexual Assault Training to aid military members who have been
allegely mistreated/violated
- Completed ## BW Search and Recovery team training; ready to be recalled in the
event of an accident/disasters
- Attended ## CS Runners Improvement Class; learned techniques for controlled
breathing to improve run time
-- Developed personal physical conditioning routine; Air Force fitness score
increased 30%--she's Fit to Fight!
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT: Air Force ambassador in squadron, base,
and the local community
- Leader of Leaders! President of ## CS Top 4--helped raise $700 for
Thankgiving
Luncheon--over 300 attended
- Volunteer Income Tax Assistance program advisor; prepared 106 returns; saved
over $16K in preparation fees
- Prepared moving memorial video for local fallen soldier; keepsake for family
members--always there to help
- Volunteered over 50 hours for American Red Cross shelter at
LSUS in aide of
Hurricane Katrina evacuees
- Aided ## CS Spouses Group food/clothing relief efforts to aide squadron members
housing over 40 evacuees
- Involved in Sq booster club and Team 56; helped raise $500+ in fundraisers to
support mentorship programs
- Volunteered to be key spouse for ## LRS material
anagement flight; helped
deployed spouses cope with issues
- Lead project NCO for retirement ceremony; coordinated all logistical and
protocol support--flawless event!
- Installation/SqVoting Committee member; ensured info was available for over
290+ personnel for elections
Note: Very Good package that may have been hampered by the spelling
errors. Integrated Maintenance Database System was abbreviated but
the abbreviation was never utilized. Other than that this is a great
package to learn from. |