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Award Examples

Enlisted Recognition Program
Senior Non-Commissioned Officer (SNCO) of the Quarter
4T071/Clinical Laboratory

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Group









Key Points to Writing
  • If you haven't already, take a writing class
  • WRITE!!! The more you do it, the better you get.
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  • The only person looking out for either you or your subordinate is YOU!
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  • Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE
- Surged forward/pulled 21 ADAF and civilians along--built '08 "AF CINC Lab Team of Year" award winners
- Led activation of decon team; 22 mbrs setup $74K IPPDC shelter/featured in base paper--lauded by COMACC
- Answered Air Staff directive; accounted for $220K HD Lab resources--prepped 6-member deployable billet
- Ramped up pre/post deployment screenings; 1,000 Airmen processed--assured uninterrupted sortie generation
- Gp POC AF ROTC Ops summer prgm; exposed 40 to16 hrs AFMS training--broadened military medical vision
- Oversaw collection 100+ 3rd party insurance forms; Gp recouped $89.4K+--100% reutilized for expenditures

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT
- Driven toward professional development; enrolled in AU-ABC in Healthcare Science--earned 8 hrs/4.0 GPA
- Unique expertise in QA mgmt; trained to Id patient safety events/rectified 16 issues--assured labs compliance

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- On-target outreach; co-chaired six APAHA events; resounding success/450+ enjoyed galas--lauded by FW CC
- Out front SNCO; elected AFSA Chapter 1261 VP; recruitment up to #8 of 200--top 10% international charters


ACRONYMS

IPPDC: In-Place Patient Decon
AU-ABC: Air University Associate-to-Baccalaureate Cooperative Program
QA: Quality Assurance
HD: Homeland Defense
APAHA: Asian Pacific American Heritage Association
AFSA: Air Force Sergeants Association

 

Comment:

I am glad to finally see a current award submission.  This one is a great example on how writing has changed recently.  As you can see in the award, abbreviations will fly as long as the people reading can easily understand what is being expressed.  It is a whole new way of writing but if you try this in your location you might run into problems....

Overall good award package showing excellent leadership capabilities.


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