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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program
SNCO of the Quarter
4T0X1/Medical Laboratory Technician
Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Group
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE:
- Piloted installation of two lab analyzers valued at $45K--enhanced patient
treatment/### FW war readiness
- Corroborated 07' CINC Installation Excellence award inputs--lab won ACC level
for wing-wide initiatives
- Identified $172K fiscal obligations; devised ### MDG $26M financial
plan--ensured continued operations
- Orchestrated SARC training; tracked 95 personnel--elevated MDSS from 47% to
100% compliance in 10 wks
- Provided expertise/guidance for three CDC end-of-course exams--insured
professional growth for lab Airmen
- Facilitated two PES II courses; promoted military
knowledge/leadership--stirred ### FW Airmen into action
SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
- Diligently amassed 12-credit hours; earned CCAF in Medical
Technology--maintained 4.0 grade point average
- Displayed sound/solid leadership; selected/attended 40-hr 1st Sgt
Symposium--procured vital SNCO skill set
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Versatile civic leader; Can-Do-Crew/Special Olympics/Vets
Standown/Days of
Caring--sacrificed 30 hours
- MDG CFC key worker; led accumulation of $37K to benefit over 2,000
charities--### FW collected $350K+
ACRONYMS:
PES - Professional Enhancement Seminar
Note
Good package. Every bullet except one self improvement bullet showed
leadership or management ability. Only one minor spelling error, Stand
Down vs Standown... |