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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program (SNCO of the Quarter, 2nd)
8C000/Superintendent, Family Support Center
Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Flt
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY
- Catalyst for the success of the Family Support Ctr; #1 factor in <BASE>
winning the Air Force FSC of the Year
- Superbly performed 1st Sgt responsibilities during Shirt's deployment; ensured
issues handled professionally
- Designed and implemented local policy to accommodate hearing impaired students
at classes offered by FSC
- Resolved chronic logistics issue for WIC office; secured office in Bldg ### and
gained approval for renovations
- Oversaw set-up, transportation, meal preparation, & tear-down of the annual
Volunteer Appreciation Picnic
- Continued an <BASE> tradition with his effort in hosting the Spring Spa for
Spouses event; over 700 attended!
- By-name request to perform SAV on the MPF; identified several deficiencies &
provided corrective measures
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT
- Awarded 2nd CCAF in Social Sciences in addition to CCAF in Financial Mgmt and
BS in Business Admin
- Improved overall score on annual PT Test; max'd out sit-up's/push-up's and run
time improved by 45 seconds
- Completed training for Exercise Evaluation Team and Government Purchase Card
Convenience Checkholder
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- MSG point for Enlisted Dining Out tickets; sold Group allocation and 10 more
seats; the spark to an A+ event
- Worked w/VFW to display American flags/crosses on veterans gravesites in
recognition of Memorial Day
- Supported base Anti-DUI program; manned <REMOVED> Gate passing out flyers and
relaying safety messages
- Submitted winning selection for the ## MSS Slogan Contest; revived unit
pride/awarded 1 day pass for effort
- Volunteered to brief FTAC students on 1st Sgt role; served quarterly birthday
dinner at base dining facility
Note: IMHO, this package is very, very weak awards package for a SNCO.
Granted the person is being recognized for his/her efforts, but the writer did
them no justice. Looking at the career field of the individual it could be
assumed this was wrote by a civilian. For those of you reading this who
work for either civilians or officers directly, the ability to provide your
supervisor with a good starter package is vital. Additionally, if you are
a SNCO and not directly involved in your awards packages then you can only blame
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