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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program
Non-Commissioned Officer (NCO) of the Quarter
1C6X1/GPS Operator & Operations Support Scheduler
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: SQU
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Key Points to Writing
- If you haven't already, take
a writing class
- WRITE!!! The more you do it, the better you get.
- Don't be afraid to ask for HELP.
- The only person looking out for either you or your subordinate is YOU!
- Use a spell checker (F7 in Office)
- Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
- Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online.
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Tackled sqd's suffering CIF/TP prgm; decimated signoff delinquencies--peaked
crew situational awareness
- Governing agent for cradle to grave trng/eval schedules; tightened
certification timeline--actions unfelt to 150+
- Executed 38 ARTS sorties; unmatched urgency sent 190 minutes back to AFSCN--over
$1M returned to O&M
- Pivotal during MCH shortage; managed 30+ sorties w/no notice for AOR
exercise--IRON FALCON a success
- Meticulously transmitted 4 specialized commands vital to OCO--melded airpower
w/ joint ops environment
- Max'd GPS' C2 efficiency--oversaw 16 system reboots--$850M AEP system returned
to optimal performance
- Unparalleled ops saavy! 1 of 6
dual cert'd operators; 50 SSO/eight MCH sorties--manning dilemma solved!
- Directed ops on secondary GPS C2; deconflicted mission schedule for two C2
systems--seamless to 1B users
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Burgeoning space professional; awarded CCAFs in Air & Space Ops/
Avionics--a clear role model to 4 Amn
- Attended "Get Motivated" nat'l seminar; reinvigorated personal drive--brought
inspirational msg to flight of six
- Improved writing skills through ## SW Silver Bullets writing crse; paid off w/
subordinate up for Amn 4Q09
- In hot pursuit of continued education goal; bachelors degree in History within
sight--maintained solid 3.0 GPA
BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Community mentor; assisted first grade reading prgrm to 20
students--reinforced reading/writing development
- Vol'd at Marian House Soup Kitchen; provided meals to less fortunate--served
300+ of community's neediest
- Chaperoned elementary school field trip; provided safety/security for 20
--received LOA from school officials
Note: Not a bad package. The main thing it can build on is
leadership. Also, in base and community involvement, continual support
tends be looked at more favorably then the "touch and go". |