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Enlisted Recognition Program
Non-Commissioned Officer (NCO) of the Quarter
1C6X1/GPS Operator & Operations Support Scheduler

Award Cat: NCO
Winner: SQU









Key Points to Writing
  • If you haven't already, take a writing class
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  • The only person looking out for either you or your subordinate is YOU!
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  • Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
  • Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online.

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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Tackled sqd's suffering CIF/TP prgm; decimated signoff delinquencies--peaked crew situational awareness
- Governing agent for cradle to grave trng/eval schedules; tightened certification timeline--actions unfelt to 150+
- Executed 38 ARTS sorties; unmatched urgency sent 190 minutes back to AFSCN--over $1M returned to O&M
- Pivotal during MCH shortage; managed 30+ sorties w/no notice for AOR exercise--IRON FALCON a success
- Meticulously transmitted 4 specialized commands vital to OCO--melded airpower w/ joint ops environment
- Max'd GPS' C2 efficiency--oversaw 16 system reboots--$850M AEP system returned to optimal performance
- Unparalleled ops saavy! 1 of 6 dual cert'd operators; 50 SSO/eight MCH sorties--manning dilemma solved!
- Directed ops on secondary GPS C2; deconflicted mission schedule for two C2 systems--seamless to 1B users

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Burgeoning space professional; awarded CCAFs in Air & Space Ops/ Avionics--a clear role model to 4 Amn
- Attended "Get Motivated" nat'l seminar; reinvigorated personal drive--brought inspirational msg to flight of six
- Improved writing skills through ## SW Silver Bullets writing crse; paid off w/ subordinate up for Amn 4Q09
- In hot pursuit of continued education goal; bachelors degree in History within sight--maintained solid 3.0 GPA

BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Community mentor; assisted first grade reading prgrm to 20 students--reinforced reading/writing development
- Vol'd at Marian House Soup Kitchen; provided meals to less fortunate--served 300+ of community's neediest
- Chaperoned elementary school field trip; provided safety/security for 20 --received LOA from school officials
 

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Not a bad package.  The main thing it can build on is leadership.  Also, in base and community involvement, continual support tends be looked at more favorably then the "touch and go".


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