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Award Examples

Enlisted Recognition Program
Non-Commissioned Officer (NCO) of the Quarter
6F051/Accounting Technician

Award Cat: NCO
Winner: Wing









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY
- Financial steward; Sq Resource Advisor; oversaw $268K budget--precisely tracked with zero shortfalls!
- Methodically researched/validated >30 GPC refunds/rebates totalling over $5K--maximized limited budget
- Meticulously reviewed ODL/Aged Orders/Advances; decommitted/deobligated >$1.2M--funded EOY QoL
- Skillfully processed/validated >300 funding transactions worth $3.1M--ensured 100% status of funds accuracy
- Led GPC reconciliation with 7 group RAs--reviewed/validated 193 accounts worth $2.7M for FY07 closeout
- Astutely managed <BASE>'s CARE pgm; certifed $1.2M; prevented interest penalty payments--no delinquent accts
- Conducted 1-on-1 trng for 7 RA's on criticial finance sys; slashed required man hrs by >20%--100% qualified
- Staunch leader! Briefed 35 AMN in 2 FTAC classes on EPR policy/procedures; expanded knowledge for all!

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT
- Dedicated off-duty hours to education--CLEP 9 credit hours towards CCAF degree in Financial Management
- Physical fitness role model! Received an "Excellent" rating on her PT test--increased score from 86 to 90.5

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Community ambassador; donated 4hrs at local orphanage/taught English to Tae Kwang Middle School students
- <BASE> lead w/AF Ball fundraiser; garnered $5K for 60th Anniversary gala--unforgettable night for 700 guests!



GPC: Government Purchase Card
ADA: Anti-Deficiency Act
ABSS: Automated Business Services System
RA: Resource Advisor
EOY: end of year
QoL: Quality of Life
ODL: Open Document Listing

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Not a bad package, but there are too many spelling errors.


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