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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program (NCO of the Quarter)
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Award Cat: NCO
Winner: Group
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Rock solid; QA Chief Inspector during manning shortfalls; supervised 17 NCO's/10
AFSC's--MSgt pos. filled!
- Strong leader; principle Sq/CC advisor for flightline/backshop Mx--managed
1.5K evals w/92% Gp pass rate
- Gets results; oversight of critical task "re-look inspections"; focused
leadership attention--6mo trend up 35%
- Authored a/c pre-towing brief; decreased incidents/damage; benchmarked by two
bases--lauded by A4M/CC
- Proactive; created QA Flash/pinned TO supplement; averted canopy Op
damage--saved $314K per incident
- Extremely organized; expedited 53 TCTO validations; ensured accuracy of
critical a/c mods--1.4K hrs of Mx
- Phenomenal; highlighted wiring repair deficiency/trained 30
Airman--re-enforced AF mentorship/quality Mx
- On point; briefed QA review boards; provided failed insp root causes--focused
training led to 16 tasks +85%
- Developed weekly "QA Nugget" roll-call topics; highlighted on/off duty
safety--reduced MXG mishap's 70%
- Airframe expert; 1 of only 4 weight/balance certified personnel--guaranteed
safety of flt/zero Class A-mishaps
- Investigated 12 incidents; detailed analysis report/damage recap to
leadership--coordinated prevention plans
- Leads the way; achieved PACAF's 1st single person launch approval; 50% manning
reduced w/12K hr savings
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Excellence through education; completed 4hr AF IT E-learning Leadership
CBT--improved NCO fundamentals
- Honed briefing skill; instructed 5 Mx courses/highlighted QA special
interest--led to 99% training effect rate
- Committed to solid state of readiness; M-9 qual/wpns custodian
certed--responsible for 107 personnel wpns
- Revamped QA's fitness prgm w/team-building activities; 100% section pass
rate--earned "Excellent" PT score
BASE/COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Sq Booster Club Pres; led American Day booth--earned $1.4K/amplified PACAF's
strongest local relationship
- AF Ball committee member; recruited Golf Tournament vols--raised $1.2K for
60th anniversary celebration
- Organized Sq Build-A-Boat project for Wg's Beach Bash--won best decorated/$100
donated to morale fund
- Compassion for others; donated $500 to support AF Widows fund/Red Feather/Red
Cross--selection a must!
Note:
Very Good Package. Kind of techie, but all in all a solid awards
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