Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program
Non-Commissioned Officer (NCO) of the Quarter
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: ???
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY: His "total focus [is] on mission
excellence!"
- Directed 60KW generator install--provided Federal Emergency Management Agency
prime power--enabled
25K tons supplies from 1K semi-trucks--White House Staff recognized #1 Hurricane
Katrina Relief effort
- Led 12 military/1 civilian employee--completed 450 maintenance actions/124
direct scheduled work orders
- Finished annual validations at 25 generator sites--certified back-up power
reliability for critical C2 facilities
- Revised WIMS
RWP program--1st revision in
four years--completed 131actions in
14 days--65 days ahead
- Planned deployable nuclear planning cell generator support for 3 ACC
bases--mobile shelters worth $43M
- Directed repair on MEP-5 high temp coolant sensor--unit supports ##BS
C&C/classified telephone system
- Expert maintainer--analyzed/changed out faulty water pump on backup generator
for base fuels offload facility
-- Supported fueling mission of 109M gallons of fuel pumped/2,900+ sorties
generated despite power outages
- Troubleshot/replaced faulty n. localizer cracked fuel pump input lines--zero
interference to navigation system
- Repaired MEP-7 relay card/burnt wires--ensured back-up for ## MXS
C&C/Maintenance Operation Center
- Aided Civil Engineer Maintenance and Inspection Repair Team with
POL Type III
equipment installation
-- Acquisitioned $12.8K material--update auto start generator reduced outage
time from 15 minutes to 12 sec
- Updated work center training plan--included new equipment--reduced 5 and
7-level upgrade training 3 months
- Superb team player--took the reigns and completely revamped supply system for
stand-by power generators
-- Developed computer based programs--streamlined shop ordering
processes--ordered $49K critical items
SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
Represents Colonel <LNAME>'s vector of
personal/professional growth
- Completed 8 credit hrs towards CCAF/Bachelors electrical engineering from
<STATE> Technical University
- Accomplished 4 hrs AF IT E-learning independent study class--broadened
leadership/managerial fundamentals
- Attended <BASE> AFB AFSC specific training--enhanced readiness skills on
contingency deployable equipment
- Devoted recognition programs supporter--squadron Airman of month board
member--produced group winner
- Attended Team-56 wing First Time Supervisory course--
- Studied extensive on-line articles from Power Quality magazines and electrical
power production web sites
-- Remains current with rapidly developing technology of electrical
generation/power distribution equipment
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT: Exemplifies "take care of each other to build an
unbeatable team"
- Assisted Team-56 win Best Maintainer Award for ##AF adopt-a-plane
program--beautified B-58 rocket sled
- Donated clothes/toys to Family Activity Center--solicited items helped
displaced Hurricane Katrina victims
- Volunteered for Providence House--assisted moving 70+ hurricane evacuated
families into permanent housing
- Fiercely devoted--worked 10 hrs at Extra Mile Warehouse--distributed 4K lbs
Hurricane relief supply items
- Unparallel contributor--helped wash cars/devoted free time to commissary
bagging for squadron booster club
-- Raised over $500 dollars--help defray cost squadron Christmas party for lower
ranking personnel/families
- Member of the ##CES bowling team #3
Note: Very good package with excellent quantification of bullets.
One thing I really found of interest was the writer highlighting the members
extensive studies of his/her career. This adds depth and shows the person
interest in their profession. (To be fair though, this type of bullet
often is used as filler... It all depends on the writer, you be the judge
of this bullet). The only thing that detracted from this packages in my
opinion was tagging Significant Self-Improvement to what appears to be a local
Col's opinions. |