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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program (NCO of the Quarter, 2nd)
3S071/NCOIC Retraining
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: Flt
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY
- Top 5% MPF SSgts; provided exemplary support to ##th Wing/<MISC> tenant
units--benchmark NCO
- Counseled customers on retraining program; provided 1st term Amn crucial
guidance--75 equipped with info
- Informed 1st term Amn of career broadening opportunities; briefed/educated
mbrs monthly--raised awareness
- Expeditiously tracked unconfirmed training allocations; accomplished 50
updates--system now 100% accurate
- Sole architect for the production/distribution of 55 TDY orders--efforts
ensured formal training objectives met
- Key UCI player; spearheaded retraining folder checklist--ensured required
actions completed in timely manner
- Premier NCO! Demonstrated commitment to ensure objectives consistently
met--processed 100+ TDY orders
- Coordinated retraining packages w/multiple base agencies,
seven MAJCOM's & HQ
AFPC; 15 error-free pkgs
- Tracked 31 Active Duty Service Commitments; ensured retainability--zero errors
for AF high-interest item
- Consummate professional; delivered quality, timely products--incredible
accuracy/service lauded by HQ ACC
- Self-confident; provided CSS members w/system trng--ensured effective
continuity for personnel community
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT
- Hard charger! Pursued CCAF degree in Human Resources; earned
3
credits--maintained impressive 4.0 GPA
- Volunteered for Silver Flag deployment training; enhanced knowledge of bare
base ops--earned "Outstanding" BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Out in front leader; critical to set-up for ## MSG change-of-command
ceremony--successful event for over 200
- Community-minded; participated in <BASE> anti-DUI campaign--educated base mbrs
& prevented alcohol abuse
Note: This isn't a strong package but it served the purpose of acknowledging
the recipient's hard work. Goes back to the theory of award submissions.
The intent is to acknowledge their efforts, even win winning the a higher level
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