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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program
Airman of the Quarter
4N051/Shift Leader, Emergency Services (ES) Flight
Award Cat: AMN
Winner: SQU
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LEADERSHIP AND PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
- Primary custodian for largest point of care program in ## MDG; revamped
program; zero discrepancies noted
- Excellent during stressful situations; administered oral glucose to patient
during diabetic crisis; saved a life
- Assisted physician with A-Line insertion on critically ill patient; avoided
multiple sticks; medications given
- Provided hands on training for 20 Phase II students; 100 % of curriculum
objectives met; member's fit to fight
- Hand selected as ES shift leader ahead of NCO's; led
five man crew on 40 ambulance
responses; zero errors
SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
- Earned six credits pursing Bachelor's/CCAF Degree in Information
Management; maintained superb 3.84 GPA
- Enhanced communication skills; presented c-spine immobilization lecture to 28
personnel; increased readiness
BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Outstanding educator; trained 52 personnel on litter carries during base
Warrior Day; 100% mission ready
- Particpated in first ever DOD
wide CCMRF exercise; critical care expertise led to acute care of 200 wounded
- Airman Against Drunk Driving advocate; on call 24 hours; escorted 4 Airman
home; 0 DUI's under his watch
ACRONYMS
CCAF- Community College of the Air Force
CCMRF- CBRNE Consequence Management Response Force
DUI- Driving Under the Influence
ES- Emergency Services
GPA- Grade Point Average
Note: I like this package. One thing that I notice in the first part
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