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Award Examples

Enlisted Recognition Program
Airman of the Quarter
4T0X1/Medical Laboratory Technician

Award Cat: AMN
Winner: No









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE
- Outstanding customer service; #1 requested tech; lauded by ### AEG Gp CMSgt--coined for professionalism
- Processed 1,000 Amn from CENTAF AOR; pre/post-deployment screenings--99% of chalks readied in <3 hrs
- Trained 4 IDMT technicians; provided standardized platform for GWOT ready medics--skills utilized in AOR
- Organized training for 12 personnel on 3rd party insurance forms--Gp reutilized cost savings/recouped $36K
- Took lead on national compliance studies; performed CAP survey on coagulation--readied lab for inspection
- Out-front leadership skills; selected by Sq Supt to plan/direct Gp picnic activities--250+ medics enjoyed gala

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Led FW FTAC briefings; promoted CoRC events--provided 150 Amn alcohol free fun--coined by CC 12 AF
- Initiated <BASE> Idol 2008; provided outlet for base residents to showcase talent--150+ people enjoyed festivities

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT
- Dedicated to academic studies toward CCAF degree completion; earned 6 credit hours--maintained 4.0 GPA
- Received lab response team training; provided tools to ship HD agents--prepared for possible CBNRE event


ACRONYMS

IDMT - Independent Duty Medical Technician
CoRC Culture of Responsible Choices
FTAC - First Term Airman Center
HD - Homeland Defense
CAP - College of American Pathologists

Note:

Not a bad package.  Some of the bullets in leadership are missing hard impact, especially the CAP bullet (5).  But the person did some good things and sets them up nicely for the annual.


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