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Award Examples
Enlisted Recognition Program
Airman of the Quarter
4T0X1/Medical Laboratory Technician
Award Cat: AMN
Winner: No
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Key Points to Writing
- If you haven't already, take
a writing class
- WRITE!!! The more you do it, the better you get.
- Don't be afraid to ask for HELP.
- The only person looking out for either you or your subordinate is YOU!
- Use a spell checker (F7 in Office)
- Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
- Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online.
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE
- Outstanding customer service; #1 requested tech; lauded by ### AEG Gp
CMSgt--coined for professionalism
- Processed 1,000 Amn from CENTAF AOR; pre/post-deployment screenings--99% of
chalks readied in <3 hrs
- Trained 4 IDMT technicians; provided standardized platform for GWOT ready
medics--skills utilized in AOR
- Organized training for 12 personnel on 3rd party insurance forms--Gp
reutilized cost savings/recouped $36K
- Took lead on national compliance studies; performed CAP survey on
coagulation--readied lab for inspection
- Out-front leadership skills; selected by Sq Supt to plan/direct Gp picnic
activities--250+ medics enjoyed gala
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Led FW FTAC briefings; promoted CoRC events--provided 150 Amn alcohol free
fun--coined by CC 12 AF
- Initiated <BASE> Idol 2008; provided outlet for base residents to showcase
talent--150+ people enjoyed festivities
SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT
- Dedicated to academic studies toward CCAF degree completion; earned 6
credit hours--maintained 4.0 GPA
- Received lab response team training; provided tools to ship HD
agents--prepared for possible CBNRE event
ACRONYMS
IDMT - Independent Duty Medical Technician
CoRC Culture of Responsible Choices
FTAC - First Term Airman Center
HD - Homeland Defense
CAP - College of American Pathologists
Note: Not a bad package. Some of the bullets in leadership are
missing hard impact, especially the CAP bullet (5). But the person did
some good things and sets them up nicely for the annual. |