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Enlisted Recognition Program
Airman of the Quarter
4T0X1/Medical Laboratory Technician

Award Cat: AMN
Winner: Flt









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE
- Member IPPD team; coord setup decon shelter/featured in base paper--lauded by COMACC for unit solidarity
- Processed pre/post deployment screening; reintegrated 1,000 CENTAF AMN--100% sorties taskings ensured
- Headed lab committee to streamline FTAC processing; optimized time in MDG--saved 2,208 man hrs annually
- Mentored 40 AFROTC; supported FW summer ops program/16 hrs AFMS trng--expanded military med vision
- Oversaw two Pima med lab students trng; provided 320 hrs of instruction; ensured task qualification stds met
- NCO level duties; trained 6 IDMTs/11 Nurses for 41 hrs of didactic lab work--prepped combat ready medics

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Civic leader; Can-Do-Crew/Special Olympics/Casa De Ninos; 26 hrs of service--epitomized FW airmanship
- Co-coordinated Sq picnic; organized events/raised >$300-- provided 70+ personnel safe/enjoyable activities

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT
- Outstanding Amn/diligently earned 9 credit hrs; completed CCAF in medical lab science--maintained 4.0 GPA
- Initiated inaugural Gp weekend safety checks; collected 84 lab tests for 100 reservists--100% warfighter ready


ACRONYMS
- IPPD - In-Place Patient Decon
- IDMT - Independent Duty Medical Technician

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