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Enlisted Recognition Program
Airman of the Quarter
2E152/Airfield Systems Technician
Award Cat: AMN
Winner: SQUADRON
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Installs, removes, inspects and performs troubleshooting and repair on
digital voice recorders and keying and signaling devices for point-to-point,
ground-to-air communications and public address systems in support of HQ USAFE,
Air Combat Command and Air Mobility Command's deployed forces. Responsible for
accurate documentation of maintenance actions. Oversees work on 400 land mobile
radio (LMR) assets and two consoles worth $700K. Advises deployed units on
ATCALS and LMR equipment capabilities and outfits contingency buildings with
appropriate communication assets. ADDITIONAL DUTIES: Base Personal Wireless
Communications System Manager, Tool Monitor, ESD Monitor, Training Monitor,
Section Safety Monitor, Vehicles Monitor, Frequency Manager
LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
- Showcased function test on 12 ATC radios during ATSEP--paramount in work
center receiving an "Excellent"
- Base security augmentee; inspected 110+ vehicles entering base during
high-threat posture--enhanced security
- Proactively provides monthly safety brief; ensured personnel are informed of
variety of hazards--zero mishaps
- Installed tactical radio in CC vehicle--ensured emergency communications
between CC and inbound aircraft
- Trained four ATCALS personnel on 36 radio tasks; provided 100% task
coverage--cleared ATSEP findings
- Stewards top-notch safety program; directly contributed to work center
receiving "Excellent" rating during UCI
- Lead technician for ATCALS during RIAT; configured ATC ground-air comm--100%
uptime for 500+ aircraft
- Orchestrated PA support for three CoC ceremonies, POW/MIA ceremony and the 911
remembrance memorial
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Enrolled in philosophy to gain credit towards degree--four credits away
from CCAF associates degree
- Coordinated PT session as a PTL for the squadron, "can do attitude " helped
push personnel to stay fit to fight
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Prepared/cooked for monthly base chapel family dinner; fed
fifty base
personnel--promoted Esprit de Corp
- Appointed as secretary for the base advisory council--disseminated meeting
minutes/documentation basewide
Acronym List:
ATC - Air Traffic Control
ATSEP - Air Traffic Systems Evaluation Program
PTL- Physical Training Leader
PT- Physical Training
ESD - Electro Static Discharge
UCI - Unit Compliance Inspection
PA- Public Address
CCAF-Community Collage of the Air Force Note: Good package. If you
have the ability to add hard numbers (factual) to a bullet do it. For
example: - Proactively provides monthly safety brief; ensured personnel are informed of
variety of hazards--zero mishaps
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