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Enlisted Recognition Program (Airman of the Quarter)
4N031/Aerospace Medical Technician

Award Cat: AMN
Winner: Base









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES:
- Avid educator; professionally instructed 16 families on newborn care/CPR--early discharges saved MDG $5K
- Recognized newborn in respiratory distress; rapid interventions saved a life--recouped $10K in transfer costs
- Restructured L&D supply/labor rooms; unit supply shortfalls slashed by 50%--recaptured $1K toward budget
- Intuitive crash cart monitor; revamped flight inventory process; emergency reliability compliance soared 37%
- Physicians #1 choice; assisted with four circumcisions--zero wound infections--abated hospital stay by 1 day
- Aided in 10 vaginal deliveries/two c-sections; precise APGAR's provided optimum care--all lives preserved
- Orientated technician; enhanced unit knowledge/skills; completed training 1 week early--now manned at 100%
- Point of Care monitor; maintained quality control of ancillary testing--reduced monthly discrepancies by 20%
- Assisted with '06 Influenza program; 2.7K inoculations administered--<BASE> 75% compliant within 1 week
- Researched high risk patients; identified possible complications/fostered parent awareness--49 neonates saved

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT:
- Enrolled in American Military University; completed six credits toward CCAF degree--maintained 3.5 GPA
- Attended blood transfusion inservice; equipped for life threatening emergencies--expanded capabilities by 5%
- Instructed EMT class; taught OB emergencies to nine medics; strengthened medical resources--all crisis ready
- Educated on vacuum delivery; facilitated class for 19--enhanced knowledge/procedures on birthing difficulties
- Trained on fetal fibronectin procedure; primed to assist in detection of pre-term labor--valuable FW/Sq asset

BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Donated 6 hrs of emergent care for <BASE> Half Marathon; patrolled route--successful event for 305 runners
- Integrated in community; conducted seminar on successful relationships--promoted moral/ethical values for 20
- Active in base theater guild; landed vital role in "A Christmas Carol"--enriched holiday moral for 215 viewers
- Devoted 12 hrs to teach Sunday school; enabled youth in understanding bible studies--mentor for eight preteens
- Member of church choir; performed in Christmas program for 60+--provided festive spirit for base community


LIST OF ACRONYMS:
L&D= Labor and Delivery
OB= Obstetrics
EMT= Emergency Medical Technician
APGAR= Appearance Pulse Grimace Activity Respiratory


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