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Enlisted Recognition Program (Airman of the Quarter, 3rd)
Award Cat: AMN
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Key Points to Writing
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- Use a spell checker (F7 in Office)
- Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
- Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online.
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY: Hand-picked to be a
squadron QAE
- Only Airman assigned to ## CS Quality Assurance workcenter; member of 5-person
inspection team ensuring
high quality maintenance production/management practices are used throughout
132-person maintenance unit
- Led 5-person team during joint Exercise Replacement Frequency Modulation
Orderwire 2005 (RFMOW)
-- Employed $4M satellite equipment for successful testing of new Orderwire
System for wartime use
- Revamped work center's outdated Resource Protection continuity binder; updated
Air Force instructions,
manuals, and squadron operating instructions to ensure Air Force
compliance--program inspection ready
- Assisted set up of new SATCOM training plan; categorized/assigned special
identifier codes for all tasks
-- 100% task coverage of SATCOM core tasks; coded all tasks in accordance with
skill level/duty position
-- Ensured proper tracking of upgrade training phases--personnel are
loaded/trained on appropriate tasks
- Drafted step-by-step inspection briefing for QA team to utilize during
maintenance personnel evaluations
-- Provided thorough explanation of evaluation process/expectations for
evaluator and inspected member
- Tracked/reviewed ancillary training requirements for Theater Deployable
Communications (TDC) personnel
-- Ensured individuals received training/records updated; TDC personnel 100%
qualified--ready to deploy
- Assisted with 16 overdue technical, personnel, and managerial evaluations in
support of the communications
standardization and evaluation program (CSEP); building the bridge to get the QA
team UCI ready in 90 days
- Assisted the transfer of ## CS technical order (TO) program; over 1,000 TOs are
100% accounted for/updated
-- Received/loaded 45 TCTOs into Automated Technical Order Management System
with minimal training
- Provides input for the squadron's Monthly Maintenance Plan; plan highlights
maintenance deficiency/trend
analysis, guidance, and governing directives to flight leadership and ## CS
Commander; problem areas visible
- Personally inventoried 11 TDC tool kits/supply items/tools; 100% accuracy for
equipment worth over $50K
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
Epitomizes the "whole-person"
concept
- Completed AF Technical Order CBT in 2 days; well exceeded 90-day allotted
timeframe--superb initiative
- Awarded 3 semester hours through CLEP examination for Principles of
Supervision; one class left to CCAF
- Enrolled in Speech, Trigonometry and Physics--50% complete towards Bachelor's
in Electrical Engineering
- Self-taught on most work center training tasks for career field
cross-utilization--will evaluate several AFSCs
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT: Air Force ambassador in squadron,
base, and local community
- Key player for ## CS intramural golf team--promoted camaraderie and esprit de
corps throughout the unit
- Helped raise over $1500 during three golf tournament fundraiser; supported
AFSA/Chief's Group initiatives
- Committee member for <SQU> Operations Flight summer BBQ; volunteered to set-up,
cook and tear-down
- Donated food/clothing for relief efforts to aide squadron members for over 40
Hurricane Katrina evacuees
- Set-up computer local area network for <NAME> Elementary classroom; 23 students
are now linked to the world
- Assisted with SQ Spouses Group "Burrito Sale" fundraiser--raised over $200 for
SQ Fall Festival Committee
Note: Not a bad package. There is a lot of good information with good
impact. There are a couple of minor
Acronym Errors, remember if you
use note an acronym use it otherwise it is just filler. Second, if you use tag
lines in the catagories, make sure it fits.
Epitomizes the "whole-person"
concept under Significant Self-Improvement is good, but the bullets do
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