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Air Force Medical Service (AFMS)

SMSgt Timothy A. Maggard Medical Readiness SNCO of the Year (2009)

4N071/Medical Readiness Flight Chief

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Air Force

AFI 36-2856 # 47


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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE:
- Recognized by PACAF/IG; 1 of 10 WG "Top Outstanding Performers" during ORI 09--WG/CC and IG coined
- Expertly executed; oversaw ORI process; zero discrepancies--direct contribution to 3rd Wing "Excellent" rate
- Deployed 110 medics to support diverse GWOT/HUMRO ops; 7,122 OPSTEMPO days-- flawless execution
- Reassigned 900+ personnel to MRL in less than 24 hrs; lauded as example for others by AF/SGX-- first in AF
- Readiness expertise valued by PACAF; MAJCOM medical IG by-name request to augment during Yokota ORI
- Devised 3yr deployment history log/briefed exec council; aided MDG ops/staffing plan--lauded by MDG/CC
- Procured $80K from AF/SGX to build immediate medical response packages; revitalized prgm--100% funded
- Identified training deficit/procured 160 slots; strengthened PACOM's only rapid response EMEDS--100% trnd
- Master planner for 3 MDG in seven 3 WG Polar Force exercises; IDRC folder prep lauded as #1 in 3rd Wing
- Led the review of 504 PFR records; identified 250 errors/action plan--eliminated discrepancies prior to ORI
- Program manager for 3 MDG Status of Resources and Training report; "Outstanding" during 3 WG inspection
- Readiness SME; tempo band assignments/new requirements; PACAF POC--AFMS 100% deployment postured
- Oversaw first-ever Hospital Evac EME and 3/dy citywide EM response exercise--kudos from City Emer Mgr
- Superbly guided PACAF's largest med mobility mission; 368 pax/79 UTCs/47 WRM projects--spanned AEF
- AF readiness asset; selected by AF as 1/32 to identify/brainstorm MR shortfalls--tackled/solved 7 challenges

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT/BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Helmed Sq Recognition Prgm; led/directed 32 boards for 12 flts/100 staff; prepared MDG selects for next lvl
- MDG CFC lead; exceeded goal/raised $62K--most ever by organization! Lauded by Wg POC as "best in WG"
- Completed 16 hrs/BHS/online JSNCO PME; applied lrnd knowledge/improved managerial skills--3.6 GPA
- Special Team Coach for Eagle River H.S. Varisty football team; coached top ranked football player in Alaska
- Coached Kniks Little League baseball; led team to Alaska State Ketchikan Championship--perfect win record!

ACRONYM LIST:
AEF- Air Expeditionary Force
EM- Emergency Management
EME- Emergency Management Exercise
GWOT- Global War on Terrorism
HUMRO- Humanitarian Relief Operations
IDRC- Installation Deployment Readiness Cell
JSNCO- Joint Senior Non-commissioned officer
MR- Medical Readiness
MRL- Master Requirements List
MRO- Medical Readiness Officer
OPSTEMP- Operations Tempo
ORI- Operational Readiess Inspection
PFR- Personnel Folder Review
POC- Point of Contact
SME- Subject Matter Expert
UTC- Unit Type Codes
WRM- War Reserve Materiel

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OUTSTANDING.  Even a non medical AFSC can understand this.  It is surprising the changes in annual awards.  This one is only 20 lines! 


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