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Air Force Medical Service (AFMS)

Outstanding Field Grade Base Bioenvironmental Engineer of the Year 2009

43E3A/Bioenvironmental Engineering Flight Commander

Award Cat: FGO
Winner: ???

AFI 36-2856 # 14


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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE:
- Outstanding leadership! AFA FGO/Yr; AK DEC "Honor Roll"; '08 MDG Flt/4th Qtr; key to '08 AF Hosp OTY
- #1/50 BSCs in MDG; #1/15 ofcrs in AMDS; hand-picked as BSC advisor by SGB; selected AMDS/CC deputy
- Aced Medical Readiness eval; #1/9 bases; PACAF inspector praised "Best BE response team in 20+ years"
- Id'd DRMO yard rad material spill; authored federal permit for $3.5M contaminated soil clean-up; public safe
- Pinpointed errors w/F-22 vent design; reengineered/tested system; solution implemented AF-wide; saved $8M
- Enhanced treatment for injured warriors; developed metal shrapnel sampling plan for wounds; 100% recovery
- Created/resourced OH transition template for AF/Army joint basing; lauded by HAF/SG, "Best MOA" to date
- Integrated HRA into $250M C-17/F-22 beddown; safeguarded 1K maintainers; all operational timelines met
- Developed AF/Army joint readiness plan; exercised response w/local agencies; first combined team in DoD
- Community advisory board medical rep; partnered w/24 agencies; $13M environmental clean-up on schedule
- Skillful engineer; assessed 34 projects for proper engineering controls; prevented $200K in construction errors
- Ensured Wg Force Protection; pinpointed 47 TIC/TIM stockpiles; computed/plotted/mitigated threat to mission
- Critical to "Excellent" ORI rating; leader during 4 OREs & 2 ATSO events; readied 500 Airmen for inspection
- Directed annual food/water vulnerability reviews; 24 critical items id'd; corrective actions cut threat by 50%
- Organized PACAF CBRN team for AF competition; fused Bio/CE members; earned top honors in two events

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT/BASE AND COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Fostered academic excellence; eight pursuing college degrees; two finished CCAF; seven completed AF PME
- Outstanding technical ability; maintained Industrial Hygiene Certification; presented poster at annual AOHC
- Active in youth prgms; Boy Scout Troop 300 leader, football/track coach, raised $3.5K for school band trips
- Advocate for higher education; represented alma mater at high school college nights; assisted interested teens
- Command ready; attained incident mgmt certification; selected BE rep on Alaska WMD Response Task Force

ACRONYM LIST:
AFA - Air Force Association
AK - Alaska
AOHC - American Occupational Health Conference
ATSO - Ability To Survive and Operate
CBRN - Chemical, Biological, Radiological, and Nuclear
CCAF - Community College of the Air Force
CE - Civil Engineering
DEC - Department of Environmental Conservation
DRMO - Defense Reutilization and Marketing Organization
HRA - Health Risk Assessment
OH - Occupational Health
ORE - Operational Readiness Evaluation
ORI - Operational Readiness Inspection
OTY- Of The Year
PME - Professional Military Education
SME - Subject Matter Expert
TIC/TIM - Toxic Industrial Chemical/Toxic Industrial Material
WMD - Weapons of Mass Destruction

Comments:

Another good AFMS Officer Package.  .
 


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