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USAF SUPPLY TECHNICIAN OF THE YEAR
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: Base
AFI
36-2818, Table 6.2
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OUTSTANDING PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTIES
- # RW's #1 of 16 supply NCOs! Leader with endless energy and enthusiasm;
supports 18 $40M U-2/U-2ST a/c
- Savvy; achieved 12 "zero defects" evals for Mar '05 Logistics
Standardization/Evaluation Team (LSET) visit
-- Dazzling SME; shop received ACC LSET Honorable Mention & Honor Roll award ...
excellence confirmed!
- Led deployed 10-person supply team supporting U-2/KC-135 combat sorties for
Operation IRAQI FREEDOM
-- Crafted a stunning 110% U-2 mission support kit and 95% KC-135 readiness
spares package supply fill rate
- Dynamic ###th AEW & ## RW NCO; guided 60K+ parts inventory valued at $63M
w/amazing 100 % accuracy
- Multi-faceted; instrumental to ###th ELRS receiving an "excellent" review
during a LSET staff assistance visit
- ###th AEW workhorse; ran 1,800 issues on 40 accounts--warfighters flew 989
sorties & racked 6K+ flying hrs
- Key player for Sep U-2 sortie surge; 75 sorties/91% "Code-1"/94% MC rate--100%
on-time part delivery rate
-- Key supply logistician for second surge--79 sorties, four over goal ...
exceeded ACC MC rate goal by 13.7%
- The best! Flawlessly managed overburdened/undermanned element--superb 97%
mission effectiveness rating
- Conquers challenges; created 66 line item mission support kit during ## RWs
2nd Qtr ORE--rated "outstanding"
- Sterling triumph! Streamlined Quality Deficiency Reporting--speedy 2-day turn
... smashed ACC's 7-day goal
- Received/processed 300 parts requests from 20 accounts monthly; ensured
completion of 500+ aircraft sorties
- Expertly managed shelf-life prgm; inspected/updated 400+ assets ... zero
expired items--non-stop MX support
- Go-to-guy; moved & shipped six
$40M ISR sensor pods to AOR--latest technology at CENTCOM's fingertips
- Researched/cleared 50+ delinquent rejects monthly; reduced rejects by 50
%--overall reject rate less than 1 %
- Directed inventory of benchstock containing 390+ items valued at
$75K--consumables on hand ready for issue
- Keen insight; issued/pulled 160 time change parts--ensured timely periodic
phase of 14 $45M U-2S/U-2ST a/c
- Force Multiplier! Conducted 5/7-level core task trng for 75% of wing supply
troops--100% upgraded on-time
- Packed/shipped supplies for future en route support teams valued at $44K ...
parts in place for transitioning a/c
- Key for three OREs; flawlessly inventoried $3M/1.8K line item msn readiness
packages--audited w/no errors
- Developed standardized qualification training plan for major work
center--vital guidance for upgrade training
- Instrumental in build-up of $16K/1,132 line item deployable benchstock--assets
assured GWOT sortie support
- Aided Support Division in creation of 154 line item/$6.5M msn support
kit--ready for contingency deployment
- Processed/tracked 60+ requisitions worth $1.2M--ensured 100% accurate status
and timely delivery of assets
- Spearhead rewarehousing project of bldg ###--increased floor/storage space an
additional 700 square feet
- Managed/monitored 100+ TNB, FOM & -21 equip; provided secure storage for $2M
in assets--zero lost items
- Skillfully developed/implemented parts Quick Reference List--streamlined
requests/decreased issue time 45%
- Identified subtle yet critical error with ordering Inertial Navigation Unit;
immediate action saved depot $517K
- Model junior NCO! Packed & shipped $7.8K Q-Bay ballast to FOL; U-2 down 7 vs
30 days--saved AF $2M
- Stellar; reviewed/updated 88 DIFMs per month--speedy
two day turnaround blasted ACC's
goal of seven days
- Sleuth; researched & cleared 56 delinquent rejects monthly--decreased errors
48% overall ... reject rate < 1%
- Multi-talented; verified/monitored ## RWs 10-15 U-2s MICAPs/week ... avg'd
phenomenal 2-day delivery time
- Energetic supervisor; led inventory/rewarehoused 26 U-2 fixed flaps--averted
critical loss of $478.8K in parts
- Aggressive customer service style overcame power take-off shaft insp--ops flew
contracted 216 msns/377 hrs
- Hard charger; worked MICAP status with WR-ALC/ACC RSS--boosted U-2 FMC yearly
rate 10.5% ... 81.9%
- Meticulous; validated $75K/399 BS items--staggering 94% Surge Operations
Effectiveness Rating 4 Qtr CY05
- Relentless; located parts/trimmed $27K for battery mock-up trainer--assured 33
troops crucial deployment trng
- Tenacious bloodhound; located $65K in missing eqpmnt--developed new tracking
guide ... no lost items to date
- Leader behind supply section intense focus on QA evaluations; over 120
inspections with 98% CY05 pass rate
- Expert parts mgr; sliced '05 cannibalization rate to 1.7%--halved '04 3.4%
rate ... crushed ACC's 3% standard
- Sustained five consecutive JTF KATRINA and RITA sorties--POTUS/FEMA lauded
images/life-saving effort
- Supported Dual Data Link-2 system upgrade/ops test/eval flights--enhanced the
U-2 ISR capability for SecDef
- Innate leadership; pivotal to ## RW '05 USSTRATCOM Omaha Trophy for best
strategic aircraft wing in DoD
General Notes:
Very good package. Definitely can understand the impact of the
individual. I like the way the author stuck with only symbols instead of
bouncing around. (i.e. $ / dollars or % / percent) There were a couple of
minor mistakes within the award. The author stayed with one way of addressing
military units, ###th, except for the wing then it was, ##. There were a
couple of numbering problems,
mainly those dealing with time. Remember numbers associated with time use
numeric form. (e.g. 9 days, 7 hours, 2 months)
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