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Lance P. Sijan USAF Leadership

Award Cat: Senior Enlisted
Winner: ???

AFI 36-2805 para 3.9









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The following Lance P. Sijan USAF Leadership Example has been taken out of a IMT document.  I have changed mission information to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  I will attempt to give a little insight to the entire process if I know it.

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I found this package to be rather interesting.  First off, on each category, the writer added one liners.  There is nothing in the AFI that discuss this one way or the other.  I think it is a good way of bringing overall ability to light at the same time plugging in buzz words of the time.


SCOPE OF RESPONSIBILITY:
- Commander, US Strategic Command (CDRUSSTRATCOM) personal communications officer (COMMO)
- Directly responsible for planning, coordination, and execution of all commander operational support missions
- Provides dedicated communications services to ensure unbroken command authority and global awareness
- Delivers specialized command, control, communications and computer (C4) solutions to 26 USSTRATCOM
  General Officers (GO), Flag Officers (FO), Senior Executive Service (SES) civilians and Coalition Officers
- Appraises and implements new technologies enhancing command's $789K mobile office for critical personnel
- Coordinates all repairs for GO/FO/SESs and 96 staff members with USSTRATCOM and host base support
- Manages integration, testing and procurement of newly developed comm capabilities for HQ USSTRATCOM
- Facilitates communication requirements with USAF, Navy and Army special mission aircraft and hosting units

PROFESSIONAL LEADERSHIP:
- Extraordinary SNCO! Continuously strives for absolute mission success--guaranteed to delivered every time
- Flawlessly executed 53 operational missions--completed 356 flying mission hours--traveled 123 days TDY
  -- Delivered C4 services to the CDRUSSTRATCOM--ensured command authority and situation awareness
- Evaluated new technologies to provide real-time alert notifications to General Officers and operational users
  -- Provided true capability assessment and recommended way ahead--projected saving totaled $1.2 million
- Skillfully orchestrated resolution of aircraft communication issue impacting CDRUSSTRATCOM mission
  -- Saved Army's priority air transport $140K--secured mission capability to support future COCOM operations
- Hard Charger! Aggressively responded to communications outage impacting commander's secure voice
  -- Restored service in 12 minutes--enabled scheduled teleconference with VCSAF to proceed uninterrupted
- Orchestrated rapid restore of 22 C4 events impacting mission performance--ensured 100% mission readiness
  -- Analyzed and cross-referenced each C4 event against a stated impacts--guaranteed mission accomplishment
- Takes initiative! Developed rotating on-call schedule--resolved 489 General Officer computer related issues
- Vigilantly worked COMSEC key requisitions for senior leader conferences--avoided potential OSD sanctions
  -- Tireless leadership! Zero security incidents--increased mission effectiveness--section graded as outstanding
- Resourceful! Skillfully negotiated the transfer of 127 BlackBerry devices to 4 AF Bases--saved service $25K
- Blazing 4-star support! Led C4 planning and execution efforts for CDRUSSTRATCOM pacific region travels
  -- Maintained full mission air-ground connectivity--100% C2 availability--lauded for superb support services

LEADERSHIP IMAGE:
- A true AF leader and mentor! Enthusiastically leads by example and works for the betterment of airmen
- Activity involved in Top-3! Chaired two scholarship boards--helped fund and promote enlisted education
- Organized 24 SNCOs to support gate operations and server for USSTRATCOM Enlisted Appreciation Day
- Unmatched dedication! Completed First Sergeant Symposium--selected to attend AF First Sergeant Academy
- Energetically leads by example! Completed BS--earned 3.83 GPA--awarded Certificate of Achievement
- Division Senior NCO of the year and USSTRATCOM 2nd quarter 07 "Best of the Best" winner--#1of 286

COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Energetic leader! Air Force Sergeants Association Chapter President--led 1476 members to support 14 events
- Organized 437 volunteers--raised $10K--provided 347 food baskets to needy families and battered women
- Selfless commitment to base and local community--volunteered over 400 hours to improve the lives of others
- Organized volunteers for Veterans Affairs facility--escort homeless veterans--ensured complete medical care

Final Note:

  I like the package, and especially the quantification.  Unsure whether it meets all of the criteria of a LPS award, but interested in hearing how it does in competition.


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