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Award Examples
12 Outstanding Airman of the Year (2010)
Vehicle Operator/Dispatcher -- Additional Duty First Sergeant
Award Cat: NCO
Winner: MAJCOM (Global Strike Command)
AFI 36-2805 para 3.4
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LEADERSHIP AND PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY
- Bronze Star recipient! Critical role in ###th MTD's 200 msns/4M mi/300
insurgent attacks w/zero casualties
- JET Amn w/Army; CC for 17 convoys; 16K miles/41K tons of cargo--supported 23
FOBs/150K allied forces
- Thwarted small arms fire attack; rapidly executed Rules of Engagement/TTPs;
efforts guaranteed no casualties
- Led 25 pre-msn convoy briefs/conducted 35 hrs of tng; reinforced critical
combat skills for 27 Amn/Soldiers
- On-scene CC at major veh accident; coordinated CLS/medevac; life saved--lauded
by Kuwait's Crown Prince
- Controled scene of attempted VBIED attack--rerouted six convoys; coordinated
QRF/EOD; insurgents detained
- Implemented physical training program for 11 Amn struggling with
standards...100% pass rate within 60 days
- Revamped squadron family care plans; initiated, updated & completed to bring
program up to 100% compliant
- Fielded Red Cross notification in Iraq...processed mbrs immediate flight to
Kuwait...timely departure home
- Led veh support for 3K requests/4K pax/1M lbs cargo/7K mi--key to support of
sole USAF dual-nuclear base
- Developed vehicle trng/eval schedules; tightened certification timeline--18
Amn upgraded/avg 2 months early
- Attended First Sergeant Symposium; selected over 20 SNCOs as sq temp 1st Sgt
for 389 civ/mil for 150 days
- Authored/issued 25 LOCs/LORs for sq CC; sptd 4 Art 15s/3 separations--enforced
stringent adherence to stds
- Attended CFM post deployment AAC; feedback induced changes to convoy trng stds;
in line w/ JFC initiative
- Coord non-medical attending orders; family arrived before emergency
surgery--ensured proper post-op care
- Counseled/further referred Amn who lost child; secured multi agency
support--ensured full recovery/rtn to duty
SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT
- In pursuit of BA degree--completed Supply Chain Mngmt course; six credit
hrs earned--maintained 3.2 GPA
- Completed Family Advocacy CRB training; 11 families
counseled & educated on family
life skills; stds upheld
- Self motivated--finished 4 hours IT E-learning managerial business ethics
CBT--broadened leadership skills
- Attended Front Line Supervisor Trainer crs; suicide awareness advisor/educator
for Sq stressed career fields
BASE AND COMMUNITY
INVOLVEMENT
- Mentor; taught Enlisted Evaluation System block to 22 FTAC
students--reinforced standards and expectations
- Unit financial specialist--assisted 5 Airmen developing financial/spending
plans--reduced average debt 10%
- Speaker at <NAME> Middle School Veteran's Day event; insight to
military life/potential
recruitment for 200
- Habitat for Humanity volunteer;
contribution saved $1600 in contractor cost--local family provided fresh start
- Led care package drive for 12 deployed mbrs at
austere locations--in time for
holidays; morale boost to troops
ACRONYMS:
CC - Convoy Commander
EOF - Escalation of Force
IED- Improvised Explosive Device
TTP - Tactics Techniques Procedures
VBIED - Vehicle Born Improvised Explosive Device
Note: Very, very good package. From a attention to detail
standpoint, the number of misspellings can detract from a very good package.
Authors, do yourself a favor, spell check, spell check, spell check! I
have been on enough boards to know this very simple action can mean the
difference between your person winning or getting second. |